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母亲节的惊喜 —— 双胞胎搞砸厨房仍暖了妈妈的心

读后续写 · 情感弧:兴奋期待 → 手忙脚乱·状况频出 → 沮丧懊恼(一片狼藉) → 相互打气·不放弃 → 重头再来·终于做成 → 忐忑被发现 → 妈妈拥抱感动 → 领悟'爱比完美更重要'升华
📂 主题:亲情关爱🧭 人与社会★ 高频主题难度:中续写2段 · 约150词2021 高考真题·全国新高考I卷
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题目 · 阅读材料 + 续写要求

先读材料
再顺两个段首句续写

📄 原文材料

虚线词=陌生词(课标外)
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.

Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.

✍️ 续写要求 · 两个段首句

🧭 段首句① Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
🧭 段首句② (自拟,承第一段成功) 端早餐上楼 / 妈妈出现 + 正能量结局