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救蜂鸟·数周后重访的告别(人与动物)

读后续写 · 情感弧:重访的期待与惦念 → 见窗已修的欣慰 → 心底牵挂那只蜂鸟 → 蜂鸟骤现的惊喜 → 四目相对的感动 → 领悟'小生命也懂感恩'升华
📂 主题:人与动物🧭 人与自然★ 高频主题难度:中续写2段 · 约150词2023年1月 高考真题·浙江卷
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题目 · 阅读材料 + 续写要求

先读材料
再顺两个段首句续写

📄 原文材料

虚线词=陌生词(课标外)
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird, desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.

With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.

When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?

As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering, she approached within six inches of my face. For a long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.

During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, "She must have come to say good-bye."

✍️ 续写要求 · 两个段首句

🧭 段首句① A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
🧭 段首句② I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. + 正能量结局