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Eva用分段小目标跑完一英里·征服迷宫教学楼(个人成长)

读后续写 · 情感弧:跑完全程的惊讶 → 领悟'分段小目标'的窍门 → 恐惧退去·信心萌生 → 把方法用于教学楼 → 迷宫渐清·从容穿行 → 领悟'化整为零·再大的挑战也能攻克'升华
📂 主题:个人成长🧭 人与自我★ 高频主题难度:中续写2段 · 约150词2024年1月 高考真题·浙江卷
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题目 · 阅读材料 + 续写要求

先读材料
再顺两个段首句续写

📄 原文材料

虚线词=陌生词(课标外)
Eva spent the first week of high school trying to keep her head above water. One of the major headaches for her was finding her way in the huge school building. It was a six-story building. On each floor, hallways stretched in four directions, leading to classrooms, laboratories, and teachers' offices. Somewhere in the building, there was also a library, a cafeteria, and a gym.

Having a poor sense of direction, Eva found it impossible to get around in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rooms were too much to think about, let alone commit to memory. She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn't exist.

In her first PE class, Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside. She searched the faces of her classmates for signs of panic. There was nothing she feared more than having to run a whole mile. To Eva, "a mile" was used to describe long distances. It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather's, and that always seemed like a long way, even in a car!

When Coach Pitt blew his whistle, Eva figured she would be left in the dust. However, while some of her classmates edged ahead, others actually fell behind. "It's just the beginning," she thought. "I'll come in last for sure."

Soon Eva began to breathe hard, with her heart pounding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind trick on herself. She stopped thinking about the word "mile." Instead, she focused on reaching the shadow cast on the track by an oak tree up ahead. Then she concentrated on jogging to the spot where the track curved. After that, she tried to see if she could complete her first lap. One lap turned into two, then three, then four.

✍️ 续写要求 · 两个段首句

🧭 段首句① When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!” to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised.
🧭 段首句② Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. + 正能量结局